November 14, 2000

"Much of Ward's notes are obviously meant for himself, making them hard to decifer, but a poignant example of the fast-paced nature of editing."

On the title page, editor Thom Ward leaves personal notes to himself and Li-Young Lee: he comments that the title should include "My" and asks Lee to include 2-4 more poems by January 2001 to make a full manuscript. At this point in the development of Book of My Nights, the manuscript only had 28 poems.

Ward also mentions the last poem "The Dove," saying it ties the whole book together. Notably, "The Dove" is not the final poem in the published Book of My Nights. Much of Ward's notes are obviously meant for himself, making them hard to decipher, but a poignant example of the fast-paced nature of editing.

At the end of the 2000 manuscript, Thom Ward included three pages of yellow notes, scribbling down his thoughts. A couple things worth noting: 

Thom is quite confident in the strength of the poems that Lee had sent him, even as a beginning draft. He also continues to be adamant about the title of the book being "Book of My Nights," a line taken from ____ (must look up poem); he mentions this edit a couple times throughout the entire manuscript. Thom also goes a little more in-depth about the length of the book, comparing the number of poems in the manuscript so far to how many were in Lee's previous collections. 

Seen here is also the beginning of BOA's efforts to advertise and push out Book of My Nights, even before its publishing: Thom mentions sending some of the poems to the "Academy" as a teaser. Later in this project, there are more frequent mentions about marketing, awards, and more, showcasing the logistical side of publishing.